Throughout my reflections, I have hinted towards aspects that I would change if I had had more time/resources. However, this is the feedback I received during the presentation:
Firstly, the yellow and the gold were too similar, and therefore did not allow the design to stand out. I should try and incorporate a different colour to accompany the yellow drapes.
There was also some questions surrounding the opaque Perspex. It was suggested that I could incorporate a wallpaper design on the frosting. I absolutely love this idea and want to add it before the end of year submission.
Lastly I need to add more notes to my elevations
Despite these holes in my design, all in all I proud of what I was able to achieve given the circumstances. And also I think that considering this was the first time I have done technical drawing, that it actually went reasonably well.
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